I'm
from Santiago de Chile but I always have wished to live in a natural
place. I’m really interested in endemic and wild animals, my father's legacy.
What about my vacations? ...
If you
imagine that I have had a classical vacation, you are wrong. First at all my house was topped, where my
mother worked as a veterinary too, so we had to find a place to stay for some time. At the
last moment my brother agrees to lend
the house that belonged to my father. These house was closed for 2 years! so all January I was in a permanent war with all
type of spiders! I had hideous dreams with spiders for many
days.
But not all was spiders. I have found some curious things. Some very oldest tarzan's films, a bow and arrows, with which I had fun for many days too.
In February I worked to pay my tenrollment and my remaining days I took my time to see series like "the Tudors" and "Downton Abbey", cause I really like the British series of epoch.
In these moment I have under control the
crazy spiders, I have seen many series, like "Sense and sensibility",
"Robin Hood", "Emma", "Northanger abbey", and
many more. And with the bow i have improved a lot.


I think is easy to read I understand evertyhing you wrote. There are some words you have to correct: arquitecture > architecture, so "arquitect" it should be architect.
ResponderEliminarI don't know if this is right> "all they can want to do", maybe you want to say: all that they want to do and what they can do. The teacher can help you with that sentence.
I don't know if "classical" is the word that your looking for, maybe is ordinary or something like that.
When you say "my brother agrees to lend the house" maybe you need to add the "us" word. It should be like this I guess: my brother agrees to lend us the house. But I'm not sure.
"tenrollment" should be> enrollment.
That's all I guess :). By the way, I don't know who are you, maybe you should complete your profile information and add a photo.